HELP ME - need to complete sonnet
When i see your beautiful smiling facemy heart goes crazy and then melts awayyour touch, your sight, your scent, your voice, your tastei need to have for every single day.Verse - 2 HELPVerse - 3...
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Hi Beefman,Whaddya think of this? (I've rewritten your lines into iambic pentameter.)Regards, Crispin --------------------------------------------------- Our LoveJust when I see your lovely smiling...
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Hi Mike,Anthony Hopkins forever! (I revised - in your interest, Mr Beefman.)
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With thanx to Lary - I revised quatrain 1:Our LoveJust when I see your lovely smiling face,my heart and mind get into disarray.So - simply be with me, a silent ace,The highest trump of all the cards...
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The most obvious advice is try to write something not as complicated as a sonnet. Else,....Daily NeedsEach time I see your pretty, smiling faceMy heart pounds crazy, then then melts clean awayYour...
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Dear Cyrano ...Oops! Wrong message board.Sorry!-- SONNET CLV (who was confused there for a moment)--
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